The other Man in her Life
I secretly looked at them,
engrossed in each other's love.
Jealously evident, I wondered
how she could love another !
She had eyes only for him,
The world was a blur to her!
I had eyes only for her,
The world was a blur to me !
God.. he was charming,
looked like innocence personified,
Was I fighting for a kingdom already conquered?
Well, I still seem to exist, for
She came over running,
coochie-cooing to him
"Look at dad" !
posted by Unknown at 10:03 PM
12 Comments:
nice. :) interesting point of view.
thanks for dropping by btb.
Did you pen that poem? Pretty good..you should start improvin on this hidden talent of yours!
@Kashyap and melchizedek : Thanks for stopping by
@Kayshap : Your page does not come up :(
@Melchizedek : Oops.. that name is a twister ! Will drop by more often :)
@srini : Thank you. Will definitely do that
wonderful one!
@Monu - Thanks !
ahh.....tantalizing.Didnt guess the end though,that says wot i think abt the post :)
@Samudraa - Welcome ! Thank you for the compliment :)
@Fathima - Thank you. Don't know how many would agree with this line of thought !
Me too!! :-) Nice one!
Nalla irukudu!
good budding poet!
well written jayan..havent seen u write poetry before...keep em comming
@Satu
@Ashok
@Thiya
That you guys ! I will probably be recycling my old poems till I pen down a new one :)
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