Tuesday, May 09, 2006

The other Man in her Life

I secretly looked at them,
engrossed in each other's love.
Jealously evident, I wondered
how she could love another !

She had eyes only for him,
The world was a blur to her!
I had eyes only for her,
The world was a blur to me !

God.. he was charming,
looked like innocence personified,
Was I fighting for a kingdom already conquered?

Well, I still seem to exist, for
She came over running,
coochie-cooing to him
"Look at dad" !

14 Comments:

Blogger the still dancer said...

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Sat Jul 23, 04:00:00 PM 2005  
Blogger A Hairy Snail said...

nice. :) interesting point of view.

thanks for dropping by btb.

Sat Jul 23, 11:26:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Srini said...

Did you pen that poem? Pretty good..you should start improvin on this hidden talent of yours!

Sun Jul 24, 07:03:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Kashyap and melchizedek : Thanks for stopping by

@Kayshap : Your page does not come up :(

@Melchizedek : Oops.. that name is a twister ! Will drop by more often :)

@srini : Thank you. Will definitely do that

Sun Jul 24, 04:40:00 PM 2005  
Blogger monu said...

wonderful one!

Mon Jul 25, 10:20:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Monu - Thanks !

Mon Jul 25, 01:02:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Samudraa said...

ahh.....tantalizing.Didnt guess the end though,that says wot i think abt the post :)

Mon Jul 25, 04:10:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Samudraa - Welcome ! Thank you for the compliment :)

Mon Jul 25, 06:40:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Fathima said...

Nice one!

Tue Jul 26, 06:01:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Fathima - Thank you. Don't know how many would agree with this line of thought !

Tue Jul 26, 07:03:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Thiya said...

Me too!! :-) Nice one!

Tue May 09, 10:41:00 PM 2006  
Blogger Nirek said...

Nalla irukudu!
good budding poet!

Wed May 10, 02:01:00 PM 2006  
Blogger ashok said...

well written jayan..havent seen u write poetry before...keep em comming

Sun May 14, 04:17:00 PM 2006  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Satu
@Ashok
@Thiya

That you guys ! I will probably be recycling my old poems till I pen down a new one :)

Thu May 18, 10:03:00 PM 2006  

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