Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Fatal Attraction


Reposting with a Prologue/Logue :P
The girl and her lover have had yet-another-quarrel. They are riding on a motorcycle when this dialogue starts. They think that they are through with each other when a little girl appears outta nowhere and almost causes an accident. I have tried to pen down(or should it be KEY down?) the reactions of the couple in the middle of a relationship-threatening fight in the light of this incident.




'I hate you', he bellowed,
'Me too', the repartee followed!

Cursing under his breath, he pondered,
'Why is he so ineffecient', she wondered !

Thatz was the last straw, he thought,
There are greener pastures, she laughed !
Good that it ended, they thought !!

Damn.. that was close ... he quivered,
Looking at the little girl, he shivered,

A squeeze on his shoulder, he felt
'Careful .. Darling', it spelt,

'Job done My Lord', the girl said merrily,
Thank you my Angel, God said readily !

'I love you', he mellowed,
'Me too', the repartee followed!

15 Comments:

Blogger Jo said...

Man, i'm not so good at judging poetry, and thus didn't get a good idea. But the pic is cool, keep clicking!

BTW, I liked the idea of "PHOEM".

Fri Jul 29, 08:22:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Narayanan Venkitu said...

I am sorry....I am a tube light.!!

Sun Jul 31, 07:32:00 AM 2005  
Blogger monu said...

me too tube light!
puirylai..expln pls!
:(

Mon Aug 01, 10:00:00 AM 2005  
Blogger monu said...

hey, now i get it..thanks to the explanation that you provided!
:)

that was so romantic..sondha anubhavam???
;-)

i liked that one...now that i see your lines in a new light!
:)

Mon Aug 01, 12:55:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Fathima said...

Excellent!

Mon Aug 01, 02:22:00 PM 2005  
Blogger ada-paavi!!!! said...

good, nice piece

Mon Aug 01, 02:37:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Venkat sir : I have 'Prologue'd this. Check it out now.

@Fathima, Vatsan : Thank you.

@Vatsan : Your religious debate has kindled the blogging fire in my roomate. ;)

Mon Aug 01, 08:27:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Monu : Like they say ...
Nature gives you the test first, then the lesson ;-(

Mon Aug 01, 08:37:00 PM 2005  
Blogger ada-paavi!!!! said...

my religious debate did?
can u give me his url?
ll wanna have a look at his blog

Mon Aug 01, 09:59:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Vatsan : He is just setting up his ID and bringing up his blog. Will let you know when he does.

Mon Aug 01, 10:04:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Nirek said...

Short and hot like mirchi da!
Cheers

Wed Nov 30, 10:27:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Satheesh : Thankz da

Thu Dec 01, 09:33:00 PM 2005  
Anonymous Sakshi said...

This is good re...

Fri Dec 02, 12:15:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Narayanan Venkitu said...

Thanks Jagan, I get it now.!
I can relate to this a lot ...now that you wrote the Prologue.!! Umm.!!

Sat Dec 03, 02:09:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Nirek said...

Hi Machans,
ive tagged you with the 7 things tag, head to my blog to find out whats it all about

Sat Dec 03, 10:53:00 PM 2005  

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