Thursday, November 24, 2005

Poles apart

"There is no proof of God's existence", he said
"Faith needs no proof", she said

"Love is nothing but a hormone imbalance", he said
"It is just about emotional balance", she said.

"You forgive.. he wins", he said
"You forgive.. both win", she said

"Take revenge, and you conquer him", he said
"Forgive, and you conquer yourself", she said

They were poles apart, and yet
were made for each other
After all, they were part of the same person
He the brain and
She the heart.

The above is an imaginary conversation between the heart and the brain


Blogger monu said...

nice one!!
y the gender identity for them???

Thu Aug 11, 12:01:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Monu : The gender identity is coz I feel that (most) women let their hearts rule their brains. For guys, I feel, it is the other way around.

Thu Aug 11, 12:06:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Narayanan Venkitu said...

Nice Jayan.!

Thu Aug 11, 12:28:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Kaps said...

hope they lived happily ever after

Thu Aug 11, 02:02:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Fathima said...

True, women use their heart most of the time and men use their head.

Thu Aug 11, 02:47:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Redi said...

I wonder why you've associated your heart to the feminine gender. I disagree !! Men are Men whatever they think., How would you associate the brain & heart of a woman?

Thu Aug 11, 04:11:00 PM 2005  
Blogger divyasurendiran said...

Twist eh? nice :)

Thu Aug 11, 06:53:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Kaps : In some cases, 'They happily lives never after' :)

Thu Aug 11, 07:38:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Redi : Just took a stand that emotion supersedes logic in most women !

@Divya : Thank u. But I do think I am getting caught in poetic stereotypes :(

Thu Aug 11, 07:41:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Nirek said...

Thought it to be one more poem on love! Nice twise :)
Nice work... keep posting

Fri Nov 25, 06:53:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Satish : Thank you da...

Fri Nov 25, 06:55:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Gayatri said...

interesting...u did escape stereotyping men and women but ended up stereotyping the brain and heart. anyway, it made for interesting reading. keep blogging coz i, for one, do enjoy reading:)

Mon Nov 28, 02:26:00 PM 2005  
Blogger death said...

get out and seek her. More pain awaits you there.

Tue Nov 29, 01:09:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Gaya3 : Could not avoid it...

@Death : Hope your problem is not pathological ;)

Tue Nov 29, 09:21:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Ram.C said...

seems no chance of a divorce....

Wed Nov 30, 03:18:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Jayan said...

@Ram : That would be very hazardous to your people management skills !

Thu Dec 01, 09:34:00 PM 2005  

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